OK, that's better.You have some of the same problems that most people have when they start these exercises:Closing negative spaces, proportions, shrinking the space behind the face, etc.check out my posts about those subjects.Click the "cartoon college" label to startyour pal,John
Hey, just browsing other peoples exercises. These are looking great! I have a little farther to go before I get to this level.. Just finished lesson 4: http://paintthemeggs.wordpress.com/John H
Wow! Nice work!